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Gigi Rodriguez-Giangiobbe's avatar

This is your first story written in English? 🤯👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼✨🩵

Amazing! I also love your illustration at the beginning.

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Hajee Sun's avatar

Yes it is hh. My sister drew the illustration and I love it too:)

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Rachel Ooi's avatar

I have phobia of cockroaches! In Malaysia where I was from, we see them once a while and some pretty huge ones! This is one of things I really like about living in Germany - the lack of the said offending creature. I would love to read part 2 where finally they found a house without (almost) cockroaches!

Great writing too! Kept me reading from beginning to the end :)

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Hajee Sun's avatar

Thank you so much, Rachel. I'm terrified of cockroaches too, and I still see some big ones from time to time. You can imagine the characters in the story moving to territories with fewer or no cockroaches like you did haha.

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L. Greaves's avatar

I really enjoyed reading this! I loved: ‘What would a house without cockroaches look like?’ Writing which can evoke interlocked ideas and messages is impressive and great to read, thought-provoking. Also, writing in a second language is madly impressive too!

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Hajee Sun's avatar

Big thanks for your comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!!

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